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HERE WE GO, THEN

Here we go, thenLittle boys who would be menOver the wallA challenge to allEn route to where we've never beenThe march is on As we tackle the dawnTaking the reinsOf airplanes and trainsEn route to...

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Where's the poetry here? The most personal expression of most personal affairs? No, this doesn't work for me. Sorry. Apart from this: The metre seems peculiar or absent; because of the short lines the...

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Dear Crispin, thank you for the critique; in the caseof this poem, however, I did enter it into a legitimatecompetition of international status and took first place,in the light verse category,...

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Well, light verse it is! But congratulations anyway. Indeed, the merit of a poem is in the eye of its beholder.I think, though, that writing light verse is the last thing a learner of poetry should...

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"legitimate competition of international status"--Exactly what competition?

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Art--well, there's light & then there's inconsequential. A great light poem is full of unexpected depth. I didn't see any here. The sentiment that we get through life by vehicles of transport...

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Thank you for your comments; I am not being defensive in any way, and do seek to learn; the competition to which Irefer was in its 52nd year; it had hundreds of entrants from around the world; some of...

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aartvark --That's twice, now, that you've specified that you weren't connected to the judging/judges of whatever competition this was. Since no one here has suggested otherwise, I'm left wondering...

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Boot Camp: Here we go againsame ole @#%$ again!!!Walking down the Avenuethree more day's and we'll be through!!!If you've ever been in any military training,then you've heard these words. It feels...

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Mysticspen, aartvark,Don't want to criticize your work. I myself wrote free verse, and my work was published on Apples and Oranges, a website that takes both formal and "other" poetry. The editor, Tom...

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